It would be impressive to connect it somehow. Adding a mystery to her cat's peculiar ways has no relevance to the plot. I feel that Hannah's cat, Moisha, is a distraction to the story and unnecessary. The murder mystery was interesting but not plausible with Hannah as a prime suspect. Since Hannah was present in finding the body and her attorney met her soon after the crime scene was discovered, wouldn't it be common sense for the witnesses to notice this? Hannah is intelligent, why didn't she think of it? Another convenience. On another note in regards to the mystery, how could Anna be the prime suspect of the murder case? Being bludgeoned to death by a gavel would surely leave blood splatters all over the killer's clothing. Then suddenly, Hannah is unsure again?! What a conundrum. It seems quite out of character and convenient for the writer. Hannah gives her heart and soul to her old college friend quite quickly. How does the new character (well partially new) suddenly arrive as a serious love interest? It seemed pretty obvious that Norman would be the one she eventually end up with. I understand this has been a long time dream for readers to see Hannah finally settle down but, I never saw this coming.
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